Inherit the Stars by Tessa Elwood had so much potential, but it didn’t quite deliver.
Three royal houses ruling three interplanetary systems are on the brink of collapse, and they must either ally together or tear each other apart in order for their people to survive.
Asa is the youngest daughter of the house of Fane, which has been fighting a devastating food and energy crisis for far too long. She thinks she can save her family’s livelihood by posing as her oldest sister in an arranged marriage with Eagle, the heir to the throne of the house of Westlet. The appearance of her mother, a traitor who defected to the house of Galton, adds fuel to the fire, while Asa also tries to save her sister Wren’s life . . . possibly from the hands of their own father.
But as Asa and Eagle forge a genuine bond, will secrets from the past and the urgent needs of their people in the present keep them divided?
From the moment I read the synopsis, I was sold. It was Sci-fi. It had an arranged intergalactic marriage and a heroine that risked it all to save her kin! As I began reading, the plot was all there, the writing was decent but the storytelling wasn’t. It felt like being dropped into the middle of the story and missing the very important prologue that explained crucial background. I think there needed to be more world-building. Taking on intergalactic politics is a huge feat, and I wish the author took more time to describe the setting and customs of each planet to fully appreciate the drastic changes for the heroine. I felt just as lost as the heroine.
I also wish the author would have spent more time developing the relationship between Eagle and Asa. They speak to each other what seems like five times the entire book but are madly in love by the end. I didn’t totally buy their romance. I wish they would have explored their differences and similarities more. The elements were all there. Eagle had a complex with his body image issues and Asa had to deal with her decontamination side effects. I wish they had recognized the common ground and the author had used it as a platform on loving who you are despite what you look like.
I really wanted to like this one, but it missed the mark. It had everything it needed to be an epic sci-fi romance but it wasn’t well executed.
STARS: 2 out of 5