Without Merit by Colleen Hoover was an extreme disappointment.
Not every mistake deserves a consequence. Sometimes the only thing it deserves is forgiveness.
The Voss family is anything but normal. They live in a repurposed church, newly baptized Dollar Voss. The once cancer-stricken mother lives in the basement, the father is married to the mother’s former nurse, the little half-brother isn’t allowed to do or eat anything fun, and the eldest siblings are irritatingly perfect. Then, there’s Merit.
Merit Voss collects trophies she hasn’t earned and secrets her family forces her to keep. While browsing the local antiques shop for her next trophy, she finds Sagan. His wit and unapologetic idealism disarm and spark renewed life into her—until she discovers that he’s completely unavailable. Merit retreats deeper into herself, watching her family from the sidelines when she learns a secret that no trophy in the world can fix.
Fed up with the lies, Merit decides to shatter the happy family illusion that she’s never been a part of before leaving them behind for good. When her escape plan fails, Merit is forced to deal with the staggering consequences of telling the truth and losing the one boy she loves.
I’ve been a fan of CoHo since I first read Slammed and fell in love with her insane ability to create real characters with tangible emotions. I was so looking forward to Without Merit. I read a sneak peek before it was released and almost passed out from anticipation and unreleased sexual tension. The excerpt was that good! But there’s nothing wrong with Hoover’s writing, it was the story itself that I had problems with. The plot was too…weird, strange, awkward? I don’t even know the right words to use.
This story was quirky but it wasn’t my cup of tea.
I don’t want to give anything away, but I feel like the theme of this book got the better of Hoover. It overtook the characters, overshadowed the romance, and in general, pushed the storyline off track until it was a spiral of characters with hidden motives and random details (A dog. A Jesus Statue. A marquee? These strange items had way too much screen time.). I wish CoHo would get back to the basics of romance without the added pressure of an underlying serious theme that was a little too “spoon-feed the reader” for my taste.
I didn’t like the protagonist so it was hard to connect. And after finishing the story, I think I wasn’t supposed to like the protagonist at first because of the overall theme. The romance with Sagan was also odd. I can’t say too much without spoilers but there was some misleading information that stayed misleading for way too long.
To be honest, I almost DNF’d this book. I’ve NEVER DNF’d a favorite author before. However, the introduction of the quirky and odd character, Luck, kept me reading even though he gave me serious stranger danger vibes. Then as the story progressed, I was drowning in red flags, hopping about sporadically like an insane flag dancer at half-time, hoping and praying the protagonist would get with the program. Throughout this story, I just wanted to shake my head. In disgust. In confusion. In w-t-f-ness. I still don’t know what to think.
Without Merit was a well-written novel with a serious theme. I applaud Hoover for taking on such an endeavor, but it became more about the social change and less about the story. I can see where people who enjoy Literary Fiction may love this, but for a romance reader, it fell short.
STARS: 2.5 out of 5